Writing detail without being long and boring

Oh yes, it’s possible!!!
All you need to do is to add adjectives, verbs and stuff into your sentence without being boring.

“What?” she asked. “Oh, whatever.” he said, “You’re hopeless.”

could be

“What” she asked politely, turning to face him. “Oh, whatever.” he shook his head, glaring at her. “You’re hopeless.”

The second option provides the reader with more detail.

So now: Take a “long and boring” piece of writing. Edit it. Read it over. Is it good now?

editor’s note(that’s me!!!!) see this link.


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